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Sudipto Ghosh's avatar

Wow! There is a lot of you in that poem. It’s not just a movement but an entire subconscious.

I loved these lines:

“To plant words like fences

and sleep behind their edges”

…and they guarded me.

The process of weeding is an emptying of sorts until you realise that emptiness is not voiding. It is the ability to live with all that you have inside and around you. To accept it and then to let them be!

A beautiful metaphor.

I would love for you to develop this further. There is so much depth in that.

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Marisa's avatar

I understand this feeling with the own voice. I do have the best excuse to stay away from it – no native speaker ☺️. With your greatly artuculated voice, I could switch to laid-back mode.

I'm getting better being more intuitional again. Yet, there's a path to walk for me with patience.

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